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한문장씩...제 나름대로 첨삭을 해 보았습니다.

영어전문가는 아니오니...그냥 의견 차원에서만 참고 당부드립니다.



In my humble opinion, there is nothing else like human being which is highly self-centered and egoistic.

 >> In my humble opinion, there is nothing else as highly self-centered and egoistic as human beings.


Basically, we believe there is no superior and inferior to be judged by us.

>> Basically, we believe there is nothing that can be judged by us as  superior or inferior to some others.


This is why people insist always freedom and human right.

>> This is why people hold with freedom and human right.

 (의견) insist는 문맥상 다소 어색해 보입니다....hold with로 대치하면 좋겠고...always는 hold 안에 어감이 일부 들어가 있으므로 뺍니다.


The only thing we fortunately got comparing to other creatures is a little more of intelligence.

>> The only thing  of human being's superiority, above all other creatures, may be a  little more of intelligence.


Poeple do not like to be discriminated and suppressed.

>> 수정이 필요없음


Nevertheless people easily deal with other creatures so hard.

>> However, people deal with other creatures so harshly.


The shark is also one of those victims humans have continuously contributed to.

>> The shark is also one of them, a victim of human cruelity.


If there is a particular boundary to split each habitat, obviously people do not beloing to sharks' area (sea).

>> The two species live in different habitats, sea and land, and people obviously don't want to get into shark's living area.


we fear of sharks due to shark attacks.

>> People fear sharks in the wildness. (굳이 attack을 쓰는 것보다,,,이리 표현하면 좀더 자연스러울 듯함)


However, in reality people have killed a number of sharks for their own wealth.

Then, who is a predator? who has the right to say 'fear'?

>> 수정이 특별히 필요없는 듯(의미가 잘 통함)