지금 예비초6이고 혼자 영작해서 첨삭 받고 있어


아래는 첨삭 전 아이가 쓴 버전인데, 이 정도 쓰면 평균 정도 되나?

아니면 좀 잘하는 수준인가?


내가 요즘 초딩 영어 감이 없어서 물어봐


본인 경험 베이스로 이야기해줘 



My least favorite season:


my least favorite season is summer because it has many mosquitoes. 

I have a mosquito allergy so I feel itchier than others. 

that’s why I hate summer. 


my daily routine during the vacation:


I usually get up at 7:30 AM and I memorize five English words and study English grammar. 


I eat breakfast after finish the morning study. 

and I read book about thirty minutes.


I go to my math academy.

I study secondary school mathematics!


when I come back to the home, I play for 2 hours!

and I eat delicious lunch.

I study Japanese.

it is very fun!


I eat dinner when finish study Japanese. 

after eat dinner I study English!


lastly, I wash and sleep!!