‘Night Haunter,’ she said, opening her eyes as she spoke the words.
‘I have come for you,’ Night Haunter said. His body was swathed in black rags stitched together from the garments of a dozen looted corpses; no tailor on Nostramo would dare outfit this nightmare.
‘Why?’ she said. She was too drained to feel fear. The situation was surreal. ‘I have done nothing wrong. I have lived all my life as well as I could.’
‘You did not dream of City’s Edge?’
‘Everyone dreams of City’s Edge,’ she said, her voice small yet defiant. ‘I tried to make myself into someone who could go there. I failed. But I did no wrong in trying. I have never harmed anyone, or wished to. I have suffered life here without complaint. Why are you here?’
Night Haunter’s eyes glinted. ‘The manner of your life is not my concern. It is the manner of your death. The manner of death you have chosen is a crime.’
He took a step forwards, looming over her.
‘There were, in ancient places, laws against self-murder,’ he said. ‘Suicides were buried without ceremony, in shame, and those caught attempting to kill themselves were often executed.’
‘But I want to die,’ she whispered.
‘Not the way I will end you,’ he hissed. ‘What I will do to you will make you wish you had opted to live. I am going to hurt you as much as it is possible to be hurt.’
‘Why?’ she breathed.
‘There are no taboos against taking one’s life here,’ said the Night Haunter. ‘Many do. This is not a happy world. But it can be a better one. By killing yourself, you take the easy way out, you encourage others to do the same. You might think you add yourself to a statistic, but your self-murder is much more than that. Every suicide adds to the rot weakening your culture. Every life abandoned is a signal that change can never be effected. You throw your existence away, and in doing so lessen the value of humanity.’
He reached out a hand and ran a ragged nail gently down her face.
‘I am going to save you. I am going to save you all. The people of this world will rise above the station of beasts. I will make them. If I have to bathe in the blood of you all to make that happen, then so be it. Justice is my purpose. The only route to total justice is fear. Without fear there can be no order. You will suffer now to feed that fear, so that many others will live, and this decaying society take the slow road to salvation.’
He pulled out a long knife he had made himself. It was unlovely, a murderer’s blade, but with it he could carve the most excruciating agonies.
‘Wait!’ she said. The blade hissed through the air.
‘Do not try,’ he said. ‘You plead for something you have already forfeited.’
The first cut parted the skin on her arm, shoulder to little finger tip, no deeper than the dermis, for he did not want her hide to tear when he ripped it from her living body. It was so swift a movement, the blade so sharp, she did not feel it. Her first unbelieving gasp of pain only came when the blood pattered to the floor.
She clutched her arm, her hand hopelessly unsuited to the task of closing the wound. She began to cry again, this time from fear and pain.
Curze grinned. ‘You do not wish to die any longer. I can tell. That is unfortunate, but it must be done.’ He advanced on her. ‘Feel joy that your death will bring justice to this world. Feel joy that I bring order.’ He cut again. This time she screamed. A droplet of warm, wet red dotted his cheek. He fought the urge to lick it off. He must be sober, and serious. ‘I assure you I do not enjoy this at all.’
His hearts quickened at the lie.
Curze fell silent. He intended the story as evidence against his father, yet he found he did not enjoy the recollection. A thought bothered him that his actions in the apartment were not dictated by any sort of inevitability, but driven by his need to let blood. He remembered the encounter clearly. He had lied to the woman. He did enjoy his purpose. He always had.
Did he act as he did because he had to, or because he wanted to?
나도 혹시 커즈에 대해 너무 나쁘고 자극적으로 번역했나 좀 걱정되네. 원문도 한번 보고 판단해봐.
윽 원문보니까 처음 보는 단어들 막 튀어나오네
나는 대충 비슷한 느낌으로 읽었음
그렇다면 다행이다
소름
I have done nothing wrong -> 그러나 내가 노력하고 실패한 것이 잘못은 아니야. 난 아무런 부정한 짓도 저지르지 않았어 정도의 말이 아닌가 싶음.
나는 잘못한 것이 없어는 좀 오역일까?
말만 놓고보면 나는 잘못한 것이 없어도 틀리지않다고 생각하는데. 앞뒤문맥을 볼때 나는 살아오면서 나쁜짓 안했다는 뉘앙스인거같아서 쓴거임.
노력하고 실패한게 잘못한건 아니다는 좀 아닌거같아서...
But I did no wrong in trying. 그건 요 부분 번역인데 좀 그른가
일단 수정할게 고마워
But I did no wrong in trying. I have never harmed anyone, or wished to. 아 이부분이 맞음. 앞에 글을 긁어와버렸네 죄송
내가 삶을 위해 노력하며 잘못을 저지르지는 않았어, 정도로 번역할까?
노력하는 중에 잘못하거나 부정한 일 안했다는 의미가 들어가있으면 나쁘지 않다고 봄 ㅇㅇ
ㅇㅋ 그거 말고 늬앙스를 곡해하거나 분위기를 이상하게 한건 없는거 같음?
너무 주제넘는 지적아닌가 싶은게 몇개 있긴한데 이따 글하나 파보겠음.
If I have to bathe in the blood of you all to make that happen, then so be it. - 내가 너희 모두의 피로 목욕을 해야 한다면 ㅡ 아닌가 싶음.
ㅇㅋ 수정할게 땡큐