아래영작문제 완성!!
쇼교(211.197)
2005-04-05 17:21
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1.When I was young,My brother and older sister laid me on their lab and called my name,and they whispered slyly "cry" "cry" "cry" to me and I blanked my eyes which were feared I used to fall in sleeping.
2.Sometimes,my brother took me backyard-toilet(?)in which a Ojum-Dok was buried and scared
me,lifting up my one-side leg and told me that "you should fall into pit if you don't care,and I used to
cry,pulling his clothes.
3.One night at which I tried to do not refuse my mother's wish,who called me "떡보,picking up 떡 to
eat hastly,the shadow which was moving under 호롱불 was very so scaring to me that I uribated on blanket,after which I would wander to get some salt,ashamed with that and I could not see front.
4.In 6.25 war time,sometimes,in a alley, somewhere in Pusan,some U.S soldiers who wandered
near the alley called us playing with my friends out and a detective who sorting out PEMP(?)told
me that "hey babe,you're not,go home",waving his hands.
5.In training camp,also it was always as had been there after I was dispatched.Only once ordered
the words :"fall in all footmen!",so I hated to study others that I used to be a first-runner.
Military Nobility,carrying the trench mortar was willingly the my assignment and at night-march I was
so hungry that I cried.
6.In spite of having aged,I myself has not been changed even a difference.Frankly,there are too many stories in myself that I wouldn't tell anybody.
7.Nowadays,also I'm stupid,shy,foolish,timid,a coward,and too have much tear,furthermore I'm
earthy character,passive,gloomy always,not speedy,a good use,and almost all judgements that I
make are always wrong,I lose in competence and never have been won in lottery,I am scared
at night ,too.
8.By now,It's a really miracle that I'm alive without a hunger.I enjoy much more happiness than given
ability.
9.Just Had I been thrown in competition,anyone like me might have dided in this Seoul street.If I had was in north-korea I would have killed my family to starvation and been a incompetent man.Who gave
this me happiness?who rescued me without any reason?guess what.
**elapsed time:1시간5분 ㅜ.ㅜ.발로하다말았삼...틀린부분지적해주삼..나름대로
다양한 구문을 사용했다오...우리나라의 전통적인 낱말은 영어로 표현하기가 매우 모호하므로
그냥 한국어로 표기했다오..(귀차니즘의압박;;;)
1시간5분까진 안걸렸소..시계을잘못봤소 약50분정도...
부담 갖지 마시고 스터디 참여를....^^;;
쇼교햏, 열심히 생활하시는 모습 보기 좋습니다. 다만 해석을 정확하게 잘 하는 사람이 번역도 어느 정도 해 낼 수 있다고 생각합니다. 먼저 정확한 해석능력을 키우는데 더 치중하시는 것이 쇼교님의 귀중한 시간을 아끼는 길이 아닐까 생각합니다. 저도 오랜만에 영작이라고 해보니 콩글리시밖엔 안 나옵니다만, 어휘의 문제는 쉽게 극복이 될 수 있으나 기본적인 약속인 문법을 틀리게 되면 아무리 어휘를 많이 알아도 도움이 안되리라 생각합니다. 주제넘은 참견 이해바랍니다.