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On July 16, 1923, I moved into Exham Priory after the last workman had finished his labours. The restoration had been a stupendous task, for little had remained of the deserted pile but a shell-like ruin; yet because it had been the seat of my ancestors I let no expense deter me. The place had not been inhabited since the reign of James the First, when a tragedy of intensely hideous, though largely unexplained, nature had struck down the master, five of his children, and several servants; and driven forth under a cloud of suspicion and terror the third son, my lineal progenitor and the only survivor of the abhorred line. With this sole heir denounced as a murderer, the estate had reverted to the crown, nor had the accused man made any attempt to exculpate himself or regain his property. Shaken by some horror greater than that of conscience or the law, and expressing only a frantic wish to exclude the ancient edifice from his sight and memory, Walter de la Poer, eleventh Baron Exham, fled to Virginia and there founded the family which by the next century had become known as Delapore.![]()
Exham Priory had remained untenanted, though later allotted to the estates of the Norrys family and much studied because of its peculiarly composite architecture; an architecture involving Gothic towers resting on a Saxon or Romanesque substructure, whose foundation in turn was of a still earlier order or blend of orders—Roman, and even Druidic or native Cymric, if legends speak truly. This foundation was a very singular thing, being merged on one side with the solid limestone of the precipice from whose brink the priory overlooked a desolate valley three miles west of the village of Anchester. Architects and antiquarians loved to examine this strange relic of forgotten centuries, but the country folk hated it. They had hated it hundreds of years before, when my ancestors lived there, and they hated it now, with the moss and mould of abandonment on it. I had not been a day in Anchester before I knew I came of an accursed house. And this week workmen have blown up Exham Priory, and are busy obliterating the traces of its foundations.
원문 보니 을유가 더 원문에 충실한데 3마일은 오역 같음. 황금가지는 좀 번역수준이 안 좋은듯.
ㅇㅇ 1.6 = 1마일이라 헷갈렸나
을유 승 - dc App
이거 근데 마지막 인부가 작업을 마쳤다는 건 뭔지 이해가 잘 안 가네. 다른 인부들은 자기 할 일 끝낸 후 다 떠나고 쟤만 혼자 남아서 하루 더 일하기라도 한 건가.
? 조상들이 살던 수도원 공사 끝낸 후에 주인공이 거기로 들어가서 사는 거 아닌가
ㅇㅇ 그니까 예를 들어 "인부 10명"이 수도원 복원 공사를 했다고 치면. 뭐 대충 거미줄도 걷어내고 나무 문도 새로 달고 도색도 새로 하고 그런 작업을 하는데, 노가다 기준이긴 하다만 웬만하면 여럿이 와서 같이 작업하고 같이 철수하잖음. 그런 의미에서 "마지막 인부가 작업을 마친 후에"라는 게 이해가 잘 안 되는 거.
끼워맞추기 식이긴 하다만 인부 9명이 일 다 끝내고 "마지막 인부"가 마무리 끝내는 거 지켜본 다음 같이 떠났다고 읽을 수는 있긴 하네.
비록 일부만 봤지만 을유는 기계적인 직역을 했네 황금가지가 월등히 잘된 번역
현대 문학만한 번역은 없는가 ..
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