In the kitchen, black-market marshmallows slide languid into syrup atop Pirate's double boiler, and soon begin thickly to bubble. Coffee brews. On a wooden pub sign daringly taken, one daylight raid, by a drunken Bartley Gobbitch, across which still survives in intaglio the legend SNIPE AND SHAFT, Teddy Bloat is mincing bananas with a great isosceles knife, from beneath whose nervous blade Pirate with one hand shovels the blonde mash into waffle batter resilient with fresh hens' eggs, for which Osbie Feel has exchanged an equal number of golf balls, these being even rarer this winter than real eggs, other hand blending the fruit in, not overvigorously, with a wire whisk, whilst surly Osbie himself, sucking frequently at a half-pint milk bottle filled with Vat 69 and water, tends to the bananas in the skillet and broiler. 



지금 읽고 있는 문장인데, 원어는 비교적 깔끔한가..?


암튼  대충 이런 만연체를 살리면서도 핀천의 의도를 정확히 포착해야 됨


그리고 그게 비문이 되어서는 안 됨


그래서 문장 나눠서 번역하는 거에 기존엔 부정적인 입장이었는데, 요즘은 좀 너그러워짐